Notes on 60 second films

Human App

• A lot of panning
• Confusing at the beginning but less after the second time
• Random angled shot ruins the effect

Custody

• Good hallway tracking shot, but it should last a bit longer
• Tense music
• Can see him squeese past the camera in the hallway
• Some of the shots are too long

Rattle

• First person view/ point of view
• About someone going through their life
• The baby rattle is a significant part of the story

Proposal

• Bathos: Undermining the meaning at the end/ Anti-climax
• Some shaky shots
• Long shot across the field was nice

The Burger

• Good angles
• Pull focusing
• Music worked really well
• Bathos

Anticipation

• Of a guy picturing everything that can go wrong with proposing
• Camera angles at the beginning  and end are really good

Control

• Some shots are out of focus
• Boy gets accepted by something but the the wind takes it away
• Story line is pretty confusing

Reviewing other peoples sixty second films has given me an idea of how shot a film i am going to have to make. Its given me a few ideas on how to angle some shots such as close ups to make my film seem more dramatic. Also two people are talking over the shoulder when someone finishes a sentence and it switches to the other person it looks to jumpy, so i am going to find a way to make it look more smooth.